Content A.
I believe that Kingston's family is ashamed that she got pregnant by a man who was not her husband. She disrespected her family and in the time of this story it was a really big deal. I think after the reputation she gave her family she did herself and her family a favor by committing suicide.
Engaging the text A.
The whole entire first page is what intrigues me. Stuff like this happens all the time today. As big as a mistake as it is, people just don't care anymore. It's almost too common. People are growing used to it. In this story though, people are willing to kill over this bad deed. To everyone now-a-days it just isn't something to worry about that much. Nobody really cares now like they did then.
Suggestions for sustained writing B.
Well It is just something that is really common now. Nobody seems to worry about it. Back then, it was something that brought shame to your entire family line. It was something people were willing to kill over. I don't have a sister but I could imagine how things would be like in my family if we had one and she got pregnant by some random guy. Most of my family initially would be disappointed but it wouldn't be the worst that could happen. Small things would just change. And my entire family would accept it. I mean its not like we would be able to just put her on the streets. We would be supportive and forget about the fact of how it happened. No reason to kill or fight or be angry about it. The thing that would have to happen though is that the sister or daughter or whoever it happened too would have to take responsibility for the child. No more games and fun and foolishness. They would have to take responsibility. No one would have to be upset and angry. It's a mistake that would cost them for a lifetime, but it's not something you could hide from. You just have to accept the fact and take control of the situation. As an individual and a family, because that's what families do.
I believe that Kingston's family is ashamed that she got pregnant by a man who was not her husband. She disrespected her family and in the time of this story it was a really big deal. I think after the reputation she gave her family she did herself and her family a favor by committing suicide.
Engaging the text A.
The whole entire first page is what intrigues me. Stuff like this happens all the time today. As big as a mistake as it is, people just don't care anymore. It's almost too common. People are growing used to it. In this story though, people are willing to kill over this bad deed. To everyone now-a-days it just isn't something to worry about that much. Nobody really cares now like they did then.
Suggestions for sustained writing B.
Well It is just something that is really common now. Nobody seems to worry about it. Back then, it was something that brought shame to your entire family line. It was something people were willing to kill over. I don't have a sister but I could imagine how things would be like in my family if we had one and she got pregnant by some random guy. Most of my family initially would be disappointed but it wouldn't be the worst that could happen. Small things would just change. And my entire family would accept it. I mean its not like we would be able to just put her on the streets. We would be supportive and forget about the fact of how it happened. No reason to kill or fight or be angry about it. The thing that would have to happen though is that the sister or daughter or whoever it happened too would have to take responsibility for the child. No more games and fun and foolishness. They would have to take responsibility. No one would have to be upset and angry. It's a mistake that would cost them for a lifetime, but it's not something you could hide from. You just have to accept the fact and take control of the situation. As an individual and a family, because that's what families do.